First time I'm reading you're thread so I might as well review a bunch of shows at once to get into it
RAW march 6th
Wow great mainevents there: Edge vs The Rock and Triple H vs Kurt Angle. Looking forward to those.
RVD vs Shelton Benjamin
: Seemed like a great high paced match. I've never seen Shelton do an enzuigiri though. RVD gets the clean win to get some momentum going into WM against Benoit. That should be an awesome match!
Kurt Angle battled Bret Hart on SNME? Should have kept that for Wrestlemania since that's a huge dreammatch. But Angle is facing Brock at WM for the title so I guess that's good to. The interview was short and sweet. Angle was in character and to the point.
AJ STyles vs Benoit
: Ughhh AJ Styles in WWE..... I hate seeing TNA guys in WWE. It just doesn't fit in. Your match description could have been more detailed here since we have 2 great wrestlers in the ring and you give us a 4 line summary? Not cool! Styles steals the victory(guess he's heel?). Dunno what purpose it served to let BEnoit lose so close to WM against a guy who apparantly is doing nothing.
Mickie James vs Molly Holly
You should do a segment between matches. 2 matches back to back doesn't come off good. Anyway it was an ok diva match. Maybe a little to long even with 7 mins, its still a womens match which means that a good match is still a waste of time IMO. Give them 5 mins max on a tv show, save the longer matches for ppv.
The HBK promo was good and it hyped up the match for WM but it came off a bit bland IMO. You could have added more DX HBK in there because he was just running down Hart's career and added a few lines of intimidation at the end. I also saw a few grammar mistakes. Other then that it was good
This stood out
Angle goes for the Angle Slam, but Triple H counters and nails a huge clothesline on The Rock
Gave me a chuckle.
Angle wins after a failed runin from Lesnar. But whats with the multiple Rock mixups?
I didn't like the Flair promo. It just doesn't sound like Flair and he looks like he's all calm and then the wooo's at the end just come off so bland. Flair vs Rhodes, most ppl won't even care about Rhodes because he's from the 80's and the match would suck ass but meh its your WM.
Seemed alright. you could have had Cena running in during the match and cost Rock the match instead of using foot on the ropes finish. Aftermath didn't make sense. Cena hits edge with a chair but edge turns around and hits the spear? When you get hit with a chair you fall down in pain, you don't turn around!
Overall. Average RAW, needed way more promo's, especially so close to WM. Most of the top guys like Edge, Rock, Cena and HHH didn't get any mic time and the ME aftermath was poorly put together.
SD March 10th
More TNA guys? meh. I've never seen Harris do an enzuigiri. You need to put more detail in the matches. Who took the snapshot at the end? Santa Clause? Also 14 mins is a ridiculous length for a tv show.
Team OVW? Like what casual fan knows/cares about OVW? Sounds like a more boring knockoff of the spirit squad. Carlito then spits in josh's face for no reason at all after asking a stupid question. Why doesn't he just answer the question even though he is heel, still doesn't mean that you can't do normal interviews. 'whip' Johnny Jeter? Couldn't you have used a less ridiculous word? Masters makes the unnecessary attack after the interview. Carlito for one, would never brawl back with a guy who's two times his size. It doesn't fit his character.
Lets see, they're brawling before the commercials but then Carlito is suddenly inring and Masters attacks again during the match? Man, that backstage attack was really unnecessary.
Lesnar's promo was pathetic. Lesnar sucks on the mic and he doesn't talk like that. He uses even more simple lines. His opponent: Paul London? Why not give a midget as an opponent straight away, might be even more predictable.
Lesnar picks up the win. You made the maineventer of wm look like he had trouble with a cruiserweight? thats bad booking. Also the match went on far to long. He should have just squashed London in 3 mins max.
I didn't care about this match because it was obviously filler. Dunno what purpose it served. Again way to much time given. Why does Johnny Jeter get his real name and Mike Mondo doesn't?
This could be great match yet you only give it four lines. Even for a summary: be more detailed! Why doesn't Jericho get any promo time?
'Good in quality' are you kidding me? Hogan's in the match and you call it good? Ok wtf is savage doing here? I could live with Rhodes/Flair but Savage/Hogan? why bring back all these fossils when you have Mysterio and such being stuck with filler matches? Aftermath is basic
Overall: 2 (bad) promo's in a SD is pathetic. The matches were either filler or weren't detailed enough and I really don't like Hogan and Savage in here. No storylines were developped and quite frankly it was a lackluster SD. And where the hell are Kennedy and JBL?
RAW June 13th
Now thats what I'm talking about! the opening promo with JBL and Triple H was great! Loved the 'tits as big as Trish' line. JBL also gives a classic promo of course but you've made a few grammar mistakes again. Spell check is your friend buddy
Kennedy is gold as always
JBL predictably screws over HHH. Try to be less predictable in your angles. HHH and JBL have the basic postmatch brawl but why does JBL run away when he has HHH down? He should continue the beatdown. If you wanted to run this coward angle then have HHH grab the sledgehammer so JBL has a reason to run away.
What was the purpose of this match? Last week it was Molly Holly vs james and this week its victoria vs dm? Where are the female feuds and where's the women's champ? She should get some airtime don't you think?
PS: its mic, not mike
Rock's promo was decent, you caught the character and it really felt like a true Rock promo. Cena should have done a rap or something, he came off very bland compared to Rock and thats not good. The inevitable brawl erupts but when you brawl you don't use a DDT, you either trade punches or use a finisher, no normal moves. Cena looked so weak in here, you better let him make a good comeback next time! And its 'whoop' not 'whip'.
first Benoit jobs to AJ Styles and this time to Edge. but at least this time it wasn't useless since edge needs the momentum going into WM. But I still don't know why you let Benoit job to AJ STyles when he has a match at WM against RVD? You totally degrade the IC match by making Benoit job so much IMO.
Rhodes/Flair. I didn't like this segment. First of all, Flair totally doesn't sound like flair. Rhodes should have been able to say more after Flair disrespected him and the brawl sucked to be honest. It was over to soon.
Ah nice, Nova goes to mitb. Good you got rid of Simon Dean.
ok, why is the match taker vs hart even made? Have mainevents make sence instead of just putting together a random one. And where were hart, taker and austin last week? Seems like you have to much superstars when half don't even show up on RAW. Austin stunners everyone, meh.
Overall. Again just like your previous shows, give more promo time to guys like austin and hart and so. This raw was better then the previous one but it still could have been better. The Flair/Rhodes promo sucked to be honest and you really need to pay attention to your spelling and grammar.
There ya go, reviewed three shows at once, cheers