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well FD, I have thought this over and I agree to write for SD in your thread, now as I can write good shows fast, i have agreed to do this today and all i need is current storylines plus the rosters, champions, and GM's! Ok, well I look forward to working with you FD!
Ok then, if you want the job, then it is yours. I will pm the rosters and the storylines etc as soon as i can find everything. Thanks for accepting the job
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yes KOPV1 & FD in the same BTB? Sweet, and good to see that KOPV1 will still keep on with one of my fav threads Unleash the Pain.

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Okay, it looks like since we have returned to being we again, it has gone back to the data that we had just before the merge happened, which was what i expected. Tomorrow i will repost Unforgiven, and then probably the last couple of shows before where i was at. I presume that Kane01 will be carrying on with smackdown, but i will check with him when i can, and then i will see what he will do about catching up.
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WWE RAW – September 19th
Took a break from homework

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling mistakes were scattered, 8.5/10

Length
Fine with me, keep it up. Longer match endings?9/10

Interesting to start with the battle royal. WOW! Snitsky won! Snitsky and hurricane will be on the pre show, thank you. They could have tainted a good PPV.

An impressive promo by Hassan. You have ameliorated leagues with promos as last week’s Hardy one was gold as well. I am glad to see him champ. If he is to lose, I think that he will not be involved in the decision.

Match 2 – MNM w/Melina vs. CM Punk and Kid Kash
Great win for Kash and Punk. Punk was isolated but he came back, just like the WWE. They have the momentum as Unforgiven is around the corner.

Match 3 – RTC w/Steven Richards vs. Charlie Haas/Shelton Benjamin/Trish Stratus
I am very intrigued with the Shelton and Haas situation. RTC win and this adds more fuel to the fire. I am disappointed you did not include Shelton in the match.

Match 4 – Chris Masters vs. Rosey w/The Hurricane
Three matches in a row without promos? At least you are getting rid of the low card matches. Masters gains momentum as he rolls into Sunday. Great interference by Snitsky, really develops Sunday’s match well.

Haas and Shelton still quarrel. Where will this go?

Oh no, yellow! Maria is her ditsy self. Flair builds up the match for Unforgiven well. Cannot wait for this one!
Brilliant promo between Angle, Flair, and RVD. Angle generates some heat for himself early with the shirt comment. Flair glorifies himself. Angle brings up ECW and that sparks RVD. RVD makes some valid points as did everyone. WOOOOOO!
Angle assaults Flair. RVD makes the save for Naitch. Ha, kick to the balls! Triple H is a coward. Nice way to depict him, I fully concur.

Edge responds from the promo last week from Hardy. Edge really is full of malice at the moment. This match might have a chance of MOTN with all the blood and excitement. Just do not make it a spotfest. I think that Edge will win as Hardy for the WHC just chills me. Edge made many valid points about both Hardy and the WHC, but I just think that Lita should have been in here to make it a dialogue. Besides that, it was a grade A promo.

Match 5 – AJ Styles vs. Rene Dupree.
Way too late! Hypes up the match for Unforgiven. AJ does not get attacked for the first time in a while. I really do not have an inkling of the winner.

A strong interview from Jericho. He wants to protect the gold and I think that he will. He fits the heel role very nice.

Match 6 - Chris Jericho, HHH, Kurt Angle and Christian vs. John Cena, Shawn Michaels, Rob Van Dam and Ric Flair
I love these matches because they feature marquee talent and you utilized four feuds at once. Brilliant idea that you thought of before Unforgiven. I like the outside brawls. Strong way to head to Sunday, F – U through the announce table.

Entertainment
Quite a good show, promos are strong, getting stronger, and you booked some quality matches. However, some matches were just ewwwwww! 8.5/10

The Bottom line
You promoted Unforgiven very well in this show. IC title match, the hardcore match before heat, four matches in the main event, it was clicking. You are heading into Unforgiven on a strong note.

My clairvoyancy will be up soon. For now, time to study for a few tests. I am going to make this quick as I want to study before I sleep
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Length
I am impressed with your lengthy match endings and summaries. 10/10

A very strong opening promo to start the show! Orton generates heat until the Rock comes out and does his usual monologue. Eddie wants to have a match and here comes the WWE champion! Orton makes a funny comment, below the bottom rope! HAHAHA! Here is the GM and he gets his cheap pop. Sets up a match!

Match 1
Rene Dupree v Charlie Haas
Haas wins via submission but what will he do? Or is this a filler?

Not a good idea to have Kane smush Foley. Street fight for the US title should be a great match at No Mercy.

Match 2
Cabinet v Eugene and Heidenreich
Eugene and Heidenreich lose! The cabinet win and then have a destruction party afterwards. You might have set two matches for No Mercy right here. Two single matches maybe as I do not see this duo lasting longer. JBL and Eugene and Benoit and Awesome maybe?

Match 3
Kane v Matt Morgan
Kane is unstoppable at the moment and that is very bad news for the likes of Carlito. Kane losing by NO DQ was a smart move as he did it intentionally. Once again, nice match summary!

Match 4
Frankie Kazarian v Psychosis
Match summaries get longer and longer! A bit late for cruiserweights but oh well. The Mexicools use themselves as heels very well. London and Kidman interfere, allowing Frankie to pick up the win.

JBL does the usual Texas stuff and his stuff. Pretty good interview hyping No Mercy!

Match 5
Eddie Guerrero and Randy Orton v The Rock and Rey Mysterio
Some very nice action in the ending! I was hoping that Orton and the Rock would be involved in the decision, but I think that this means that Eddie will face Rey for the title. Hopefully, the feud will end there. Maybe Rock vs. Orton at No Mercy.

Another match for No Mercy! You are clicking!
Because whoever gets the winning fall for his team will become the Cruiserweight Champion. And his two Partners will become the Tag Team Champions.

This might cause a rift, but it might not. I personally feel this is the end of the Mexicools!

Batista promo hypes the main event

Match 6
End of the Line Tournament-Semi Final Match
Chris Benoit v Batista
Both men perform some signature moves but before we see the headbutt, Eddie is here. Spinebuster and Batista Bomb is the end of the line for Benoit unfortunately. Please get rid of this friendship. I really hope you have something planned or else you are emulating the WWE.

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This review was hurried. I like how you work things as you are quite good. Everything is well hyped.

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WWE RAW – October 3rd - Homecoming

Goodness, this will take forever!

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling was on target except for one blunder, but that does not matter, if I read correctly. Some grammatical mistakes, 9/10


Length
Good, great, grand, spectacular, fantastic, I could go on for hours, so insert adjective here. That was one aspect. The other aspect is that you need to remember that this is three hours. This certainly had four hours on it. 7/10

Match 1 – Shawn Michaels vs. Rob Van Dam – Gold Rush Semi Final
Angle to interfere was expected. Angle costs RVD the win, but HBK does not look like a heel as he Sweet Chin Musics Angle down! HBK wins, but I would really be surprised to see him as champion.

Todd was out of line here. It was funny, but not him. Christian did very well, he insulted Undertaker, he city, and Todd. Well done!

Good, Kurt wants to address the crowd and not the bimbo.
He does very well in generating heat, he insults the sports teams, he makes himself look divine, and he mocks RVD. RVD does well getting the fans to go along with him. The title exchange was fantastic. RVD leaving Angle in the ring is a great way to carry on this feud.

Match 2 – Triple H vs. Ric Flair – Street Fight
Second match as a street fight?? The roulette is sure to have a large influence tonight. The chair works well. Both men always use the legs as their body pinpoint. Flair makes the comeback but HHH nails the pedigree!! What?? Flair kicks out!! This is a PPV already! Flair also uses the sledgehammer!!! HHH taps out!! Great match summary!! Loved it all and I wish that it was in full!
Oh, typical HHH, assualt after match. Sledgehammer and Pedgiree, the ™ of HHH. Cannot wait to see where this feud continues onto.

Very strong promo here as Jericho is Bischoff's man. Last man standing??? Good Arjuns!!! PPV card! Wish I was there! I thought that Jericho would be afraid of the last man standing match, but he actually looks forward to it. Should be interesting, but no doubt that Jericho wins.
Coach is by far, the greatest hardcore champion. An ECW guy against him, should be a title change. Heyman and Eric at Taboo Tuesday?? EWWW?? The only time they should be in the same ring together is when Stone Cold stuns them both. Should have some stipulation like loser leaves Raw.

Very credible monologue from Hassan, better than any of mine. He makes many valid points, not just his treatment, but to those people of the middle east who are already obsolete. The usual for the gold rush and undefeated.... Hassan vs. Styles..... again!

Match 3 – Mohammed Hassan © w/Daivari vs. AJ Styles – Intercontinental Title
Hassan walks away?? No way it ends like this.

Yup. Heyman is here. The roulette spins on steel cage!! You are going overboard. This is more than a blood brawl would offer.

Match 4 – Mohammed Hassan © w/Daivari vs. AJ Styles – Intercontinental title – Cage match
Davari has some good interruption in this match. Hassan plays the role of heel well. Styles wins!! NO way!! Highly unexpected, especically after the harangue that Hassan inveighed on. Very shocked as Hassan loses his first match, but I am sure that there will be revenge soon.

Match 5 - Carlito, JBL, Randy Orton and Mike Awesome w/Orlando Jordan v Chris Benoit, Rock, Batista and Rey Mysterio - 8 Man Tag Team Match
I like that the faces dominate in the early going, until they give way to the heels. Some great action at the end such as the count break up. Big brawl was expected. I like the ending with the three on one win. I knew that the faces would win, but it sets up more tension for their matches at No Mercy. Rock vs. Orton should be awesome.

I hope that this is Cena's last shot. Three times is the limit. Nonetheless, the usual from Cena, but he was more fired up than usual.

Lingerie contest for the womens title? Do you mean a lingerie match? Anyway, I think that Heyman should have made the announcement because he is the face. It should be a decent interlude though.

Match 6 – Shelton Benjamin vs. Charlie Haas – Pure wrestling match
Thank you! After all the blood and gore, we see wrestling! This should be fantastic, NCAA champions! Seton Hall vs. Minnesota! What? I thought that this was a mat wrestling match??? Oh well, works well in their first encounter in the ring. Haas wins with the cradle and that is sure to make Benjamin explode. Hey, Haas does not shake the hand this time. But he is still given the T - BONE. By far, this is your most intriguing feud.

Triple H gives a reasonable expaination.

Match 7 – The Coach vs. Stone Cold Steve Austin – Hardcore Title
WOW!!! Another shock! Stone Cold!! The regular promo as Coach escapes. Stone Cold is back! SCSA nails the Stunner, but Eric coerces the referee. Stone Cold drives a black pick up truck, or a zamboni at times. Coach is still champ then I guess.

Match 8 – Christian w/Tyson Tomko vs. The Undertaker – Gold Rush Semi Final – Steel Chain Match
WAY TOO MUCH!!! At least Christain cannot run! Undertaker should have a great chance at advancing. Decent summary! What? HBK nails Sweet Chin Music ..... to both of them! Will he turn heel? Undertaker is able to pick up the win, but in a very unTaker-esque fashion. Christian and HBK continues, but HBK looks heel to me.

Yea!!! RTC is here to make the save!! Just kidding! They make their point but the women are angry, you know what that means!

Match 9 - Right To Censor © w/Steven Richards and Stacy Keibler vs. CM Punk/Kid Kash – Raw Tag Team Titles
I guess I will not be able to read second rate porn. HOLY FRIGGIN BATMAN! Another title change! This is absolutely crazy. The interesting team of CM Punk and Kid Kash win the titles after RTC had them for a few weeks too long. I guess the rematch is next week.

Shawn Michaels is intent on winning, so maybe he just might. He is definitely turning heel.

Promo of the night right here with Hardy and Edge. The emotion was there and Hardy looked strong. Maybe a bit more Lita when Hardy was out there would have been better. Piper hosting the show had little meaning, but he made an appearence. They brawl! Edge is on top, but then Hardy nails a twist of fate on a table! They have lost serious blood lately. Taboo Tuesday and the feud continues as this has to be decided. A tournament and this, you have the world title picture in control. HUH?? Awful decision in my opinion. I know that enemies tag with each other, but this is not the right instance.

Match 10 – Chris Jericho © vs. John Cena – Raw Heavyweight Championship – Last Man Standing
What a match here! Great main event, so many close calls here. I expected Jericho to win here, but where to go for Cena. He is not in the tournament and he is not a MITB holder. He is sure to fade out of the title picture for the time being. I just do not know who he will be against. Maybe we will see him on a SS team against Jericho?? The possibilites are endless.

COMMENTARY????????

Entertainment
By far, this was better than what a PPV would produce. I am sorry about the too much blood, it would have been entertaining to see this four hour extraganza. Brillinat show! Promos were there too, but the matches would have been a spectacle to see, 10/10

Bottomline
I think that you should have installed commentary. This whole show was great, Piper's pit could have been earlier, but really did not have any qualms. This seemed bigger than Wrestlemania though, so many stipulations, and the roulette. I cannot wait to see what happens down the road from here. But for now, I am tired and I want to rest.
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WWE RAW – October 10th

I am back!

Length, spelling, and grammar were strong as usual.


Now that is the way to rebound off a homecoming show! That opening promo was golden, even better than one of your Hardy and Edge ones. Eric and Coach have chemistry together as heels. Heyman and Stone Cold had a great beer party at the end. I just loved the way that this promo was presented. The match at Taboo Tuesday should be great, but I expected that Coach would remain champion for a shorter amount of time. I do also like the fact that Jericho was given the night off, but that never holds true …..

Jericho and offers?? I am sure we are going to see something special.

Match 1 – Trish Stratus © vs. Stacy Kiebler w/Steven Richards – Women’s Title
I really hope that RTC break up soon. Trish gains an obvious win. With all the chances that Stacy has had, I would have expected someone else to be given a shot at the title.

MNM do the usual celebrity stuff and they use homecoming well. I am sure we will see them with the belts soon. Maybe a run in later in the show?

Match 2 – Christian w/Tyson Tomko vs. Val Venis
Yea! Christian wins! But what to do with him? I see that he wants the title, but for some reason, I have an inkling that he will end up with a match against someone who loses the gold rush tournament.

Maria: Oh, I’m sorry; I think I made another mistake. But tonight you are teaming with the Edge from U2 to face Eminem, how are you feeling?

Goodness, that was funny! The whole promo was decent but I feel that it is getting repititive.

Match 3 – AJ Styles © vs. Simon Dean w/Maven – Intercontinental Title
AJ does not defend against the very best in his first defense, but it is a believable opponent. Muhammad Hassan beats down AJ leading me to believe that Hassan will get his rematch at Taboo Tuesday, and it will be a stipulation match.

Match 4 – MNM w/Melina vs. Edge and Matt Hardy w/Lita

Edge staying out of the match was a great touch, even though I never have liked the idea of opponents tagging with each other. Edge elevates his heel status by costing Hardy the match. This should culminate in a good way, though I am sure it will not happen at TT but at SS.

Why are you using the black background? Be a WE’ er. Use white! Yellow is not readable.

I did not expect to see Flair as he is selling the injuries. The usual boring HHH, but the message is across, HHH is the new man, and Flair is the old.

Terse little RVD bit, but Heyman asserts some control as CO GM. The match will be under ECW rules, but no chance that RVD wins. I am thinking that RVD will be feuding with Jericho though as Cena is done. Maybe Cena and Angle while RVD and Jericho?

Match 5 – CM Punk and Kid Kash © vs. RTC w/Steven Richards – Raw Tag Team Titles
Three title matches on one show? You sure this is not the supershow? I was expecting MNM to run in after the match. I am sure that we will see the team of Kask and Punk vs. MNM soon.

Shelton acted very much as a heel in this promo. Shelton and Haas just will be a great feud, even though it has been done before. I know that you have a gimmick match prepared for us. Shelton as heel is working out. Haas finally leaves Benjamin lying on the ground.

Shawn is surely a heel, but why?

Match 6 – Shawn Michaels vs. The Undertaker – Gold Rush Tournament Final
You need to differentiate between Raw and Supershow! You carried it on! A strong match between these two, glad you made it detailed. It was interference galore, knew that HHH cannot have just one segment, Christian wants the title, Jericho is involved as well. HBK and Taker are out, HHH takes out Jericho, and Christian takes out HHH!! Christian may just get the title. Cena!!! Cena knocks Christian out, maybe a feud here?? Jericho gets him again though, for the hundredth time. I thought this was over.

HBK, Undertaker, Cena, Christian, HHH, Jericho = Six men

Six men = ELIMINATION CHAMBER! I am calling it right now!

Entertainment
Great show as usual, almost as superb as the supershow! 9/10

Bottomline
You did go overboard, but in a good way. TT is going to be awesome. The opening promo new week will be great as well, I can see an ELIMINATION CHAMBER from here, with all six men having valid points.

THIS IS THE LAST REVIEW YOU ARE GETTING FROM ME!
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good to know you are still going on FD, is kane01 back?

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Hope to see you get back on track shortly FD. Any sign of Kane 01 yet?
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I'm Here. I shall repost No Mercy after FD reposts Unforgiven

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