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Re: WWE 2010: The Return of Excellence
Let me start off by saying I like your style, it's easy to read and the full promos really add to the story. When guys like Wade Barrett and John Cena talked I could hear their voices in my head which is a good sign. There's not that much to say at the moment though, it was your first RAW and it's hard to already make significant changes to real life with just one show. I hope you put a spin on the Nexus angle and it looks like you're about to give Ted DiBiase a good push which I like. Overall a nice read. Not really a fan of big pieces of text entirely in red, so maybe you could spice it up somehow?
I think NXT would benefit from full promos by the way.