Learning to break kayfabe
Join Date: Jun 2010
Re: Shotokai presents: NWA Reborn
This makes me wanna do a BTB just like this. All the junior matches were very good, it's quite a roster of cruiserweights. A-Train was a great choice to put the world title on. Everything looks solid, matches are well written and the show is laid out well, but you should put a bit more effort into the font, use more colors, spell ou the names fully instead of intitials etc. I'll review more soon, and you might be so kind as to leave a review on my btb
Hehe, thanks for the feedback, man. I was in a rush when formatting, so now I edited the post with a little more italics and bold. I might review your BTB thread soon
Originally Posted by miguel21oliveira
Very fresh BTB wanted to see an original one like this in a long time, liked the matches but I think you should work more on the promos.
Donīt like the A-Train name, A-Train makes me remember of a WWE jobber, if you call him Giant Bernard it will make more impact, or itīs just me being a little bitch about it...
Hey! Thanks for the feedback as well. As it is the first episode, I didn't have an idea of what I could put in the promos. The next show, I'll work harder on them...I still have to introduce Paul Heyman to the show
LOL, my plan is to have him change his name, but I just don't know what to call him... Giant Albert? lol