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post #59 of (permalink) Old 09-28-2009, 10:15 PM
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Re: The Future Has Arrived - A Dolph Ziggler Diary -

Good update man. I'm glad you didn't just have Orton's part, and that you added more to this with the ESPN thing. You made a very smart and right decision with that. You shouldn't have written Orton like that. He was in character, that's not what I'm talking about. Every time Orton had a sentence you made it into a whole new sentence with Randy Orton: in front of it. Just have one long paragraph with some reaction the fans had to it and add another long paragraph. That's my only advice to you.

Good, nonetheless.

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