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Old 08-10-2009, 03:26 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Default Re: AMRocky25 Presents: WWE - The Future

Couple thoughts.

Mr. Kennedy in the main event picture is a VERY good thing. Your writing needs a little bit of fixing. Lots of spelling errors. I like the prospect of a Hardy/Batista feud. It was the focul point of the show. I also like how you have the intros to every superstar. WHERE were the commercials? You need those breaks to slow the pace a little. Try implementing them. Overall, it was fair first effort. 5/10
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