Re: WWE: Changing It Forever
Racer’s SmackDown Review
OK Show overall, I would give it a 6/10, your characters sounded out of character…Example
MVP: Well I tell you another great moment for you, seeing as I failed to make him retire. You retired the great Ric Flair this Wrestlemania that’s just gone. What was it like for you to achieve this?
HBK: It was sensational and seeing you couldn’t do that makes me laugh. I did it with enthusiasm, with the sweet chin music and the crowd were so outstanding that I could just feel the movement of the match. And I also did it in the grandest stage of em all and that is Wrestlemania.
I highly doubt Shawn would say that he defeated flair with enthusiasm or even be happy about the win, although it would have been a good way to turn him heel although even with him saying that he still got the cheers.
Match writing didn’t flow to good as there was to many full stops and He then’s change it up a bit add commas, allow the match to come freely to you. Another thing is to try add more description to your Whole show in general as it lack some try describing the little things as it will improve the show over all other then that show wasn’t to bad can’t wait till Raw, and looks like ill be taking over smackdown from here on in…
-Racer
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