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S1 | Nice to see D-X's open challenge because it could either show how strong DX are, or put a new team over. Lol at HBK forgetting about beating the BOD. Only problem is I didn't think HHH was in character really, but HBK was good.

** | The match was ok, but i'm loving Kennedy getting involved, this could lead to an incredble feud if you do it right. Even though, it was a screwjob, the win should be good for the RNWC.

S3 | This fatal four-way could be incredible if you decide that's what you want to do. You nailed the Snatino dialogue, very funny and realistic. I'm happy you didn't give Benji to much to say, I hate when people try to make Shelton a good talker, because he is not one IRL. You got that right. I'm hoping for a heel turn by Carlito. I'd mark for that.

S4 |This is a very interesting storyline but you took away from this segment with bad grammar and spelling. The Hitman turning up is great though.. Angle-Jericho is shaping up well. Looking forward to seeing what these leads to.

S5 | You can never get too much of a good thing, and Santino is a good thing. Another funny, solid segment. I hope you do this well but don't go to close to how the WWE did it.

S6 | Nice match, and i'm happy you gave the heels a win, this should make the feud more compelling. I;m liking the end too.

S7 | A draft is always exciting and this should be a prime example. I would have liked this to have been longer, make it more than just an announcement. Vince seemed in character.

S8 | This could lead to a very good match and Backlash. Sparks are flying and I want to see where it leads. Suprised Mickie didn't go crazy more though when Candice slapped her.

S9 | I would have loved Sandman to have won here, so i'm not to happy. I didn't think the match was great but the ending was ok. I don't think you captured the true bad-ass of Sandman. Davari getting invovlved was alright. I hope you book a rematch.

S10 | Elijah move is agreat one, I think he will suit Raw better. I'm a big fan of his. Seems he is going to be a face, just a vibe I picked up from his speech. Lokking forward to seeing if you can let him fulfill his potential.

S11 | Good promo, I like Rated R and I hope you use them wisely. One problem, I didn't like that Christian said 'wish me luck', It didn't match his cocky character. Nice build-up to the Main Event though.

S12 | Nice match but the ending was of mad one but you handled it quite well. If you are going to write that much for a match, seperate it with paragraphs. I'm happy Orton got the win. I hope this leads to a kind of Survivor Series match.

OVERALL | Above average show which I mostly enjoyed. I hope you keep working and improving, it was very solid. But you need to check your speeling and grammar more, it took away from the show. MOTN = The Main Event, Promo OTN = Punk/Santino/Carlito/Benjamin. Overall: 7/10