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Join Date: Nov 2007
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Re: WWE | -TR™- Takes Charge
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Originally Posted by greenstuff99
Greenstuff's Smackdown Review
First and for most I haven't really been reading this thread, but I will try and review all your Smackdowns for you. And I am sure I will pick up on the feuds and whats going on sooner or later.
Wow, Taker vs. Edge vs. Show, should be a great match, nice opening commentery. WOOO, A massive main event I wil be looking foward to that, I wonder how Taker and Show will get a long as they are going head to head at Judgment Day! Brilliant segmant between La Familia and Teddy, Edge was most sertainly in character as was Teddy and Vickie. Amazing segmant with Big Show, he certainly went crazy but I wonder what Vickie will do as she will probably dish out a punnishment. Great opening segmant mate, I am impressed already.
Great first match, and a geat way to kick the show off. Exciting read with good description through the whole thing. It's good Dykstra won but I would have liked to see Noble win, are these two in a feud or did you just let them have some T.V time?
I knew she would punish him, great punnishment, I would have never come up with that idea! Thats a good way to hype up the main event along with Judgment Day, I wonder who will win in the main event?  OH MY GOD!!!! Linda McMahon is here, what a fraking announcment, thats what I wish somebody would say to her everytime I watch Smackdown! Wow you really do make this exciting this is by far one of the best BTB's I have read.   Anyway as I have probably made clear to you, another great segmant making me want to read on and on and on!
Fantastic second match, nice to see Finlay win, again you put in some really good detail and description. Ah poor Hornswoggle, getting laid out, but this looks like an interesting feud. I'll see how this one develops. 
Nice lengthy interview with Matt, I can see he is having a feud with MVP so far, It looks interesting from what Matt made it. Good Judgment Day advertisement, good narating and It hypes it up well along with adding an extra kick to your shows and BTB.
Nice to see you run through the card of Judgment Day, again another good hyping skill just like the wwe use. And a good idea. Ok third match, I see Batista is taking on Michaels at Judgment Day so this is kind of a squash match for him I guess. Well It was good length and some nice points and detail, Obviously Michaels was going to win, but can I ask Is Michaels a Smackdown wrestler? Anyway nice to see he won anyway. Woo  , wasnt excpecting that, but still a great way to hype up their match, and another question does Batista wrestle on Raw?
Nice additional segmant with Josh checking on Batista, I think he will be ok for Judgment Day and I am really looking foward to it now! Well looks like Vickie is annoyed, this should be a good match with Chavo and Kane, It's looking good.
Oh Chavo picking up the victory with a roll-up, very Chavo like, brilliant match and fantastic detail in it. To be honest with you I thought It would be a squash match where Kane just beats Chavo up, but you went against that and thre a good match at me, I was very impresed. This is prooving to be a great BTB, have you ever done this before?
Wow, again I wasn't excpecting the after-mouth of this match, but nontheless It was a good one, It is funny how Chavo stands tall over Matt as I think it should be MVP, anyway nice written match and segmant afterwards.
Good Raw, rebound, It is nice to see whats been going on, with Raw. Brilliant promo with Edge here, he was definatly in character, another nice addition to the show. A really, really, really good main event here. FANTASTIC!!! I really was amazed as I was with all the show, I never knew you were this good, you could be one of the best bookers here on WF If you keep at it. I am just curious to see how you write your PPV'S, as It's looking really good.
Anyway back to the main event, like all your matches the description was there along with the edge of your seat feel. Brilliant way to end the show with Edge nailing both of them with a spear.
I must say this again was one of the best shows I have read in a long, long time. The only think wrong with It, Is that after near enough every match a person comes out and either attacks them or helps them. You should make that just maybed once or twice a show. Because in 4 out of 5 matches It is a bit to much. Anyway I love your promos and your matches as everyone is in character and all the matches are descriptive. Well Done!
97/100
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WWE Judgment Day
May 19th, 2008
Qwest Center
Omaha, Nebraska
Winners are in bold.
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The Undertaker (c) vs The Big Show vs Edge
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Shawn Michaels vs Batista
WOMENS' CHAMPIONSHIP
Mickie James (c) vs Beth Phoenix
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1. No, Kenny Dykstra and Jamie Noble aren't in a feud, I'm just giving them TV time, and Kenny Dykstra's receiving a push right now
2. Shawn Michaels and Batista are both on SmackDown
Thanks for the feedback, Greenstuff, your comments have flattered me to say the least  Just let me know when your next show's up, I'd love to read on in your BTB
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