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Old 06-08-2008, 12:15 AM   #51 (permalink)
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Thumbs up Re: Wrestlemania 24, What Happens Next

RAW REVIEW BY gmkhercules

At the opening, i expected a promo, nevertheless, a fairly good match with Holly taking on Brian Kendrick. Aftermath shows that Holly really wants to hurt the team members of London/Kendrick.

Regal promo was ok. But a little more than that is appreciated. Hey, careful with the spelling - "no make devious acts". I think it is "no more...".

Jericho/Umaga match was good and Umaga rolling away when Jericho attempts the move was slightly off realism because in the real WWE, Umaga often gets the shots. And the ending was surprising as Jericho won by a lionsault. Umaga would need more than that, IMO. But, overall, a good match!
The aftermath was fairly done as well.

The Randy Orton promo was a bit comical, thanks to Maria. Orton certainly, did not buy it off. It hypes out his match with Kennedy.

Orton/Kennedy: A good match, the best so far. Nice to see that Orton was pretty much the real one attempting RKO whenever in position. Kennedy winning seemed great for their feud. Nice match.

Paul London/Cody Rhodes match:

This was nicely done with the cruiserweights. But hey, too many fairly won battles tonight. So, try for some surprises and cheating to show the real heel talents. Good one. At Backlash however, I wish the Champs retain the title. The Hooliganz are so good at their young age!

Candice/Melina segment + match: Hey, the promo was ok. But hey, unless pre planned, I am surprised to see them get on right away. Usually, guys get to do that. But this was a nice one and ma girl Candice takes the victory. Beth Phoenix vs Candice should be good.


Strong words by CEna. Some comments but i will save it till the end....

Regal vs Cena (main event)

MOTN! Frankly, a very good one, IMO!!!! The ending was also nice with Cena taking the victory after a well placed F-U. The aftermath was good and wondered why Kennedy raised Regal's hand.

So, man, promos can be done a little long and more creative. You are doing it nice, but practise it more. Matches are very nice and i am sure you will turn out to be a great match writer. A little more color (see that it doesn't affect readers visually, if does, then dont do it. This is better)

Overall: 7/10 Impressive
All the best!

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