Hollywood Event

SD Review

The opening promo was decent but you might want to try to avoid making Edge speak in a long paragraph like you've done. Try to break it up into smaller sentences and add more description, describe his looks and the crowd's reaction throughout.

Palumbo gets a big win over Mark Henry. It appears you are building a Chavo Guerrero/Chuck Palumbo storyline, it'll be interesting to see how that plays out.

Kennedy against Punk is something that I would really like to see, I liked Kennedy's arrogance calling himself the greatest wrestler alive.

Booker gets the DQ win thanks to an assault by Finlay, thought Punk would go over here tbh. I think the finish could be a little better.

Interesting concept for the Taker match next week. Should be good to see what happens there.

I thought that Edge & Batista would win the main event and they have done. The build-up throughout the show for the WHC match has been really good and a major plus point.

Overall: This show is quite good but there is room for improvement particularly in the opening promo. I'll look foward to reading your stuff in the future.

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