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Old 12-01-2007, 05:22 PM   #148 (permalink)
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Default Re: WWE: A Strong Response

I would like to try and read along with this BTB, and read through most of this show. Not going to try and review it, but just wanted to point a thing or two at. First off, your promos could use quite a bit of work. The opening promo with Trips wasn't bad, but every other promo was horribly forced and bland, and the dialogue between the participants involved was as dry as it comes. It makes it very hard to stay involved with your show when the promos are as bland and weak as they are, hence why I ended up skimming.

Also, I saw you hype up this big announcement and all, supposedly one of the biggest bombshells ever... is that Triple H and Stephanie McMahon are married!? You're serious? That was the bombshell? Something almost every WWE fan knows, and something the WWE has hinted at and made suggestive remarks about (Triple H sooo many times during the DX stuff, and again when she showed up during the 'bastard child' thing)? That is SUCH a bust, it's horrible. Don't try and hype something up to be huge, when it is in fact common knowledge. That's a great way to throw off a solid booker from being a fan of this.
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