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Re: "Revenge of Nitemare"....hilarious i guarantee it

I've seen better dialect in 70's porn flicks. I've read more drama in a Goosebumps book. I've witnessed better shit in a tossed away pair of boxers.

In other words. It beats watching an episode of Jerry Springer...but it doesn't come close to being as entertaining.

I agree with Cowie's view. Readable? Hell no. (I made it to the And..and..and Mexicans, and stopped) You need to be more creative. Switch up the words a little and such. The true sign of a good writer.

^^ I AGREE WITH THAT GUY! ^^

If I were a black man...I'd call my penis the Oreo Fun Stick.



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