Re: WWE 2006 by randyorton24 and Renegade™
Length: 13 pages is pretty good. I like 14 or 15 pages though. 8.5/10
Booking: 7 matches is awesome for a weekly show! People do five or six, but I like seven. 10/10
Spelling/Grammar: So many errors. I know you said you knew that you had a lot of errors. This is where it is going to hurt you. 4/10
Entertainment: This show was entertaining. I liked it. 8/10
Realism: This show seemed real. Kennedy has a title shot? That is probably the only problem. 9/10
Overall: 79% which is a C+ Not a bad show, but not a great show. It was pretty good. But yeah, grammar killed your show big time. Other then that, it was a decent show.
"I defeated your uncle Victarion and his Iron Fleet off Fair Isle, the first time your father crowned himself. I held Storm's End against the power of the Reach for a year, and took Dragonstone from the Targaryens. I smashed Mance Rayder at the Wall, though he had twenty times my numbers. Tell me, turncloak, what battles has the Bastard of Bolton ever won that I should fear him?" - Stannis Baratheon