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Old 08-25-2011, 05:36 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Default Re: UCW: Ultimate Championship Wrestling

There are a few spelling errors here and there, but the majority of this was very well written. I like your idea of the Four Horsemen and your promos fit the characters you use nicely. I can almost imagine these people using your words...and that's always a sign of a good writer. Your commentary lags a tad here and there, but again...most of it is put together well. I enjoyed reading this BTB and I'll definitely be back to read more when it's posted.
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